confused

I'm not sure which book the other reviewers read but i don't think it was the same one as i did. First off the book had some good spots and i think a lot of potential. some of the inconsistencies were pretty glaring though. There was no way to relate to her. She would talk about the world being different and things changing but still harped on childish hurt feelings like they were the end of the world. The romantic angle was also ridiculous. The author made some timing and plot mistakes varying descriptions of the same person in different parts of the book. character contradictions and such. i think it would be a great book with some editing and polish. one of the biggest things that would have bumped it up another star would be to get a new narrator. I could hear the losenge she was sucking on in the beginning of the book clicking against her teeth. She only has a few voices to draw on, none of them a decent male voice and the female voices are very similar or stereotypical. The cheerleader, the whiner, the nerd etc. with all the varying types of people in this book someone with a better base to draw on would have helped this book a lot. this is just my humble opinion though. I think i should point out that i bought this book with a credit and this is my honest review.

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