what stands out?.....the lack of substance.

here we are in the 3rd installment of the "hero" Amelia. This whole story would work so much better with out the main character being in it. all she is, is plot convenience. EVERY problem that occurs is because of her, something she did... or for the sheer fact of her in action. when that is the whole premise of the story, it sadly gets old quick and mind knowingly boring. We have to sit and listen to these pointless Monologs all the time that go on and on and on....for instance, it was like a whole chapter of having to listen to the inner Monolog of the royal chef about Amelia's shrimp fried rice.... when all the ridiculous character had to do was just take a bite and find out.... but nah let's have us listen to stupid non senseical garbage to waist the chapter. And there is the sheer fact no one in the story can just spit out a sentence.... they have to be cut off or studder or just keep quiet.... in order to cause a problem that doesn't need to be made.
All in all the story is just an on and on again rehash of the other 2 books. Amelia does nothing. bad things happen. plot armor activates.

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