Defiance of the Fall
A LitRPG Adventure
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Pavi Proczko
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Written by:
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TheFirstDefier
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JF Brink
About this listen
Zac was alone in the middle of the forest when the world changed...
The whole planet was introduced to the multiverse by an unfeeling System... or God. A universe where an endless number of races and civilizations fought for power and dominion.
Zac finds himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts, demons, and worse. Alone, lost and without answers, he must find the means to survive and get stronger in this new cut-throat reality.
With only a hatchet for his weapon, he'll have to seek out his family before the world collapses... or die trying.
Experience the start of the hit LitRPG series with nearly 20 Million views on Royal Road. For the first time, Defiance of the Fall is now available on Kindle, Kindle Unlimited, and Audible narrated by Pavi Prozcko.
About the Series: Jump into a LitRPG Apocalypse story that merges LitRPG elements with eastern cultivation. Class systems, skill systems, endless choices for progression, it has everything fans of the genre love. Explore a vast universe full of mystery, adventure, danger and even aliens; where even a random passer-by might hold the power of a god. Follow Zac as he struggles to stake out a unique path to power as a mortal in a world full of cultivators.
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- Nathan Bosch
- 2021-07-28
great book
I really enjoyed this one, the only disappointment I have is that the 2nd one isn't out yet. great story, easy to follow thank you.
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- Clara
- 2022-03-11
Worth a Listen
While I will say I was often cringing a little at the beginning of the book I became quite enthralled by the end. There where some questionable word choices and sentences in the beginning. While the words didn't always mesh well together it drastically improved as the book progressed along with all subsequent books. If I had to take a guess I'd say the author found their stride and stopped overthinking things.
I've listened up until book four at this point and am quite pleased with the author and narrator. Both have done a wonderful job keeping the book entertaining. Keep up the good work guys!
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Overall4 out of 5 stars
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- Dia
- 2021-06-20
It Was Alright
Very standard, typical. Not a whole lot of new, but decent nonetheless. It certainly got a lot better nearer to the end, but it wasn't necessarily bad nor amazing at any point.
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- Jordan
- 2021-06-08
awesome book
one of the best litrpg books out there with a lot of cultivation elements blended in, all in all 10/10
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Overall5 out of 5 stars
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- Richard
- 2023-02-25
Enjoyed it a lot
Since this book is the set up for the series it started a little slow as you got to understand the situation, the system and how it would affect earth and Zach.
Over all it was well paced, didn’t treat you like a complete idiot and didn’t get too deep into the mechanics, but deep enough you understand the power bands.
Would like to see a little more secondary character development, but honestly you can see it start to take shape at the end of the book, so I feel book 2 will get into it more.
For this style of book, if you like lit rpg/system style series, then it should appeal to you.
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- TjR
- 2023-03-18
An interesting story that hints at much more to come
It’s a good story, very little of it is the main character talking at this point though I’m sure we will see the perspective shift. I love the hints at an endless multiverse immeasurable in size and population. I look forward to exploring it throughout the series. The voice acting suffers from something that drives me nuts, when all of the characters sound sullen or snotty or dumb. None of the characters get a voice that isn’t brittle or sullen sounding like a child even though they are older. It’s as if any voice but the narrators own narration voice ends up being cartoonish, nasally or like some classically portrayed 80’s TV sitcom nerd. I’m not throwing the narration out with the bath water, he has some good qualities including his narration voice and I hope the vocal performance settles down in upcoming books since I don’t think every single main character voice needs to be move up in register from the narration voice. But I trust the narrator and the narration is solid and clear, pleasant even. I find most narration undergoes an evolution through a series so I’ll hope for the same here.
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- Dellion
- 2023-06-18
Great book…..
Great book! It started out a little slow but it picks up and you grow with the MC
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- Honix
- 2024-01-13
An interesting premise
This story is a very interesting one and if you like to see the main character gain more and more power without it being boring and repetitive I recommend you try this story.
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- Christian
- 2022-08-08
pretty good
The author's vocabulary and word choice need improving. Reading "didn't dare" as the preface to every choice the author wants to emphasize as important makes me wish he had "did dare" to go grab a thesaurus, and occasionally a dictionary. Did you know decimated means killed one in ten rather than devastated? the author unfortunately doesn't seem to as he uses it as as the descriptor for the majority of impactful actions in every combat sequence.
Gross over usage of a handful of descriptors aside, the story is fun and the system mechanics and world are interesting and engaging. it made me want to design a D&D campaign with some of the ideas integrated in. The main character is likeable and straightforward without a lot of the whininess and uninspired philosophical musings that are rife in the genre. Overall a good series if you like LitRPG
The combat sequences and power level descriptors need more care taken in word choices and less catch all phrases. Read Brandon Sanderson's Mistborn for truly masterful combat sequences.
Overall enjoyable, with fun rapid pacing. I will keep reading and think the author's overall story is engaging and fun.
P.S A good editor or a solid pool of beta readers would take your stories to the next level very quickly!
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Overall5 out of 5 stars
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Performance5 out of 5 stars
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Story5 out of 5 stars
- PolarisFx
- 2021-12-03
Smithereens
The authors favorite word must be smithereens. Because I heard it so many times.
Absolutely stellar. Both the audio performance and the book itself. I have read alot of LitRPG.. like so much that everything tends to blend together at this point. So it's really awesome when something like this comes out, not since DCC have I read LitRPG this good and I am so glad there are 2 more books on kindle so it doesn't have to end.
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