3.5 Stars - Spoiliers

These two books have a lot of potential but I found there were areas of concern / room for improvement. I know many readers wouldn't be bothered by my concerns. Nevertheless, it's important I write an honest review so others in my 'lane' of thinking are aware. Firstly, the beginning of the second book contains specific descriptions of childhood sexual abuse so trigger warning for those who may be concerned about this. Secondly, broaching the subject of abuse is one thing but neither of the books attempt to resolve the issue of said abuse in a healthy way from the hero's point of view. This may be different in the following books but i don't know. Thirdly, to make a very long story short, the first book would be greatly improved if the writing was tighter. Fourthly, there were two 'closed door' descriptions of sexual relations and this is unfortunate. Unfortunate because it was a missed opportunity to efficiently / effectively develop the two main characters and hold the reader's / listener's attention more so in book one. Yet, there are layers of writing that skillfully build the characters and there relationship in subtler ways. Also, the dialogue is well written except for one area of text in the beginning of book 1. It's important to note that as the series progresses the writing improves and the reader / listener is treated to deeper layers of the characters emotions and a more exciting story line.

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