webtoon??

What is the story here? it's not a love story. it starts with Grey grumbling he has people to do things, but when he's back in his old hometown, he has to slum it. Then, two seconds later, he sees his now homeless, childhood friend and then slumming it is what he wants. He's dropping, I love you and baby, and you're mine, from the get go when prior to the present, they last saw each other when he was 16 and Liam was 19, and they did nothing back then, so there's no I have gotten to know you now and have fallen for you connection.

They are shacking up from first meeting with "I've looked for you for years" from Grey and one shower, no grooming, no sweet kisses, and topped off with a dog that hops onto the covers after sex without a second thought. really? you're telling me the dog of a homeless man doesn't have the same grime? no grooming for the dog. The dog is like an afterthought or prop in this story.

I think i see what the author wants to do but failed to do. everything is left at the surface, nothing in depth. There are so many concepts started but not quite executed well enough to make an impact or make the story actually worth the read/listen.

This book reads like a webtoon by an imaginative, dreamy, 16 year old, that has been turned into a novel.

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