The story was great but.....

The story was really well written. The only problem I had with it was the female narrator. Aside from the overpronounciation of letters and whole words at times the majority of the story was narrated by her. When she was doing the voice of her best friend she didn't even try to differentiate the voices so they both sounded the same (one example is chapter 30 when they are in the dorm room). There were a few times I had to go back as it would make me lose track of what was going on in the chapter. Her multiple (supposed) male voices were not much better. It would have been great if it was in duet so it didn't revolve around a narrator who a lot of the time gave the impression she was trying too hard and over doing it to the point where it got annoying. Would have liked a little more of the male narrator in the second story just to break up having to hear the female narrator the majority of the time. By the middle of the book she gave the impression she wasn't even trying anymore with the voices. I think when you are narrating the majority of the story you have to at least try to keep the listeners attention. There were a few times I almost DNF because of her. The only reason I listened to the end is because I wanted to know how it ended after listening to the first one too. There were a few chapters where I zoned out but didn't rewind the chapter as I didn't want to hear the females voice any longer than I had to. If she was just more natural and not so fake it would have been so much better and would have added a whole new dimension to the story, It was, sadly, a missed opportunity

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