A Missed Connection

While the premise held promise, I couldn't help but feel that the connection between the two main characters lacked depth and development. One of the key issues I encountered was the abruptness of their intense connection. It felt as though the author skipped over the crucial stages of building this bond, leaving me longing for a more gradual and meaningful development of their relationship. The absence of this crucial build-up made it challenging to fully invest in the connection between the characters.

Furthermore, the portrayal of one of the main characters, who had never been with a woman before, left much to be desired. It seemed like there was a missed opportunity to explore her emotions, uncertainties, and what drew her towards this newfound attraction. A deeper exploration of her internal journey could have enriched the narrative and helped readers connect more profoundly with her character.

I also did not like the voice and tone of how Alex was portrayed. It was unattractive and didn’t seem to fit the persona described by the author.

Despite these shortcomings, I appreciate the effort to tell a story within this genre and hope to see more nuanced and developed portrayals of LGBTQ+ relationships in literature.

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